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Monday 5 November 2018

A Scary Story

One dark night I went into a scary haunted house. Their
was a skeleton in the lounge playing fortnite.


Suddenly I heard a vacuum going “brmm, brmm”. I quickly
went under the table. The vacuum ate everything in sight!
 I hid in the corner the house and it looked like a vacuum ready
to suck me up.

Finally, I climbed up in my web and I  was safe.

2 comments:

  1. Hi my name is Quaid.
    That was a great story but next time you should make it better like add question mark's and add more juicy words and it will be better.
    Thanks bye.

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  2. hi my name is Taj the video is so cool.

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